Fish Circulatory System

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In my biology class we are currently studying circulatory systems of mammals and fish, and we were asked to complete a short (500 words) essay comparing the two. As fish are such a big part of my life I found this fascinating and thought others here, especially in the scientific section, might be interested in it as well.

Also, if you think I have made a mistake or disagree with something I have said, please feel free to inform me, I'm very new to the subject and eager to learn n_n

With reference to fish and mammals compare single and double circulatory systems

The circulatory system is how blood moves throughout living organisms. Some creatures, such as fish, have a single circulatory system, some have a double, such as mammals, and some have a partial, such as amphibians.

Fish are cold blooded and so rely on the water temperature around them to keep them warm or cool enough. They have gills for breathing, or gaseous exchange, whereas mammals have lungs. The main advantage of having gills is probably that it’s impossible for a fish to choke. Some fish such as gourami and betta have a labyrinth organ which also allows them to breath air from the surface of water. In a fish blood is pumped first to the gills where it is oxygenized, then it is taken around the entire body, before returning to the heart, where it then goes back to the lungs gills. The hearts main purpose is to act as a pump so that the blood have enough pressure to make it’s journey through the entire body without loosing too much pressure like when it goes through capillaries. Fish have a single circulatory system, so the blood only goes through their heart (The ‘pump’) once on it’s journey, this means that there is less momentum for the blood especially once it has gone through capillaries. The distances that the blood needs to travel can be great and so the demands are high. This system is seen to be less efficient than a double circulatory system.

Mammals such as monkeys, felines, canines and humans are all warm blooded, meaning they are able to maintain their own body temperature (Generally kept at least 10°C above air temperature.) Mammals have a very high demand on energy and nutrients. The specialist exchange surfaces used for gaseous exchange (Or, respiration) in mammals are known as the lungs. In the mammal circulatory system blood travels first through the right atrium, at this point is contains no oxygen and so would be blue in colour, it then travels through the right ventricle where it travels to the lung. In the lung the blood becomes oxygenated, now it would appear red. Next the blood travels via the pulmonary veins through to the left atrium. After that the blood goes through the left venticle, leaves the heart by the aorta and begins travelling around the body. The ventricles act as pumps and so because the blood has gone trhough wo of these ‘pumps’ it has much more momentum to use in it’s journey around the body. The most energy is require when the blood reaches the feet, and needs to travel back up to the heart, this is why when people have low blood pressure, they faint. This is the bodies way of making it easier for the blood to get back to the heart. The double pump system, aka double circulatory system is much more effective than a single circulatory system because of the increased pressure that allows a more effective blood transport system.

I would ideally have liked to add more on the subject of fishes gills as a specialist exchange surface, but I'm already over the 500 word limit as it is -__-

-Rezz

[Edited because I am the typo moster. RAWR.]
 
Just one minor thing I noticed. I think you are reffering to the gills, not lungs at the end of this sentence. Right?

In a fish blood is pumped first to the gills where it is oxygenized, then it is taken around the entire body, before returning to the heart, where it then goes back to the lungs.

Otherwise, I don't know much about biology, so I can't comment. :blush:
 
Grammar and punctuation could use some work.

In a fish, blood is pumped first to the...
The heart's main purpose is to...
...have enough pressure to make its journey through the entire body... this its should not have the apostrophe. The apostrophe in it's is never possessive, only a contraction for "it is", so if you cannot replace any incident of "it's" with "it is" because it doesn't make sense, then you want "its".
There are more, you need to go over it very carefully to make sure all the punctuation and grammar is correct.

Also, from a technical standpoint, I think that it is unfair to say "probably that it’s impossible for a fish to choke" because damage to the gills can occur, from being attacked or having something getting lodged in there. Also, a fish will effectively "choke" outside of water.

The sentence about labyrinth fish has almost nothing to do with your main discussion and seems at odds with the rest of the essay. I would take it out, especially as you say you are over 500 words already.

Lastly, "momentum" doesn't seem like the right word in the 1st paragraph. From a technical standpoint, a pump is usually viewed as an energy source, not a momentum source. The energy of the pump goes into creating pressure and it is the pressure gradient that gives the fluid momentum. Maybe I am being picky, but "pressure" or "energy" I think are more accurate words than momentum.

The second paragraph is good, just has many grammar and punctuation errors again.
 
cold blooded

Not really the best term in the world. Poikilothermic would be better, or possibly ectothermic?


The main advantage of having gills is probably that it’s impossible for a fish to choke.

Er... The main advantage is probably the large surface area to volume ratio for gaseous exchange.

at this point is contains no oxygen and so would be blue in colour

No, it wouldn't...
 

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